Giselle Pagedoll

I think that your art is amazing , Very detailed by being colored and the lines , Although i think that you could of used more defined bright colors , good colors and good animation . i think that the animation toy done was very clever ,Well done ! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
Your visual for your drawing including :
Colors - 1 point about it = i love the colors but i think that i should tweak it up a bit <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Animation - 100 % of effort put into it , i think that is well presented

proportion - very proportionality although the welcome sign can be accurately drawn again

Originality - Very Anime like but more like chibi too i think that the outline needs to be not so present ( the write around the character .

Technique -
The brush skills are well presented and used properly
and the technique of the animation is amazing

Impacted - Stands out and the colors burst . it makes me focus on her face more than like her clothes

Well done and i hope I've encouraged you more , please don't be offended by what i said and i cant wait to see your art grow more . Yours Sincere Dark